Like, the fact that Olivia is actually a super famous actress whose stage name is Brooke. It doesn't do anything for the story except add these weird awkward scenes where Olivia wants to do Hawk, but feels a little guilty because she knows she's engaged to someone she can't remember.but she still does Hawk anyway.and it turns out she was on the run from her crime-lord fiancé because he was roughing her up a bit.but she ends up still feeling guilty about cheating on the guy.who also bangs underage sex trafficking victims.Īdded to this was a whole bunch of ridiculousness to explain stupid stuff that didn't even need to be in the book anyway. Why did the author decide to give her amnesia? I have absolutely no freaking clue. She's knocked unconscious, and despite his frequent worry that she's dying, all he's capable of doing is getting a stiffy every time he thinks about her.Īnd when Olivia wakes up, turns out she has amnesia. They meet when Hawk comes around a blind corner and demolishes Olivia's car. They're absolutely ridiculous and their actions make no sense. The general plot with the ex-SEAL wanting revenge on the guy who killed his buddy and then falling in love with the bad guy's girl? Super funĪ handful of side characters with great personalities that you can't wait to read more about in their books? Yup, just right Have you ever gotten really frustrated with a book because you could see all the potential it has, but it just doesn't come together right? This is that book for me.
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